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The silver lining on my clouds of grey,
You'll find you're always on my mind.
The beacon of my every day,
I love you more than words can define.

Eternally a name inscribed
Written with love on my heart.
Underneath clearly described:
"You and I shall never part".

Lying on my bed as I think of you,
A rainbow spreads across my face.
When you said that you'd be true;
I wished I was in another place.

Fall asleep and now I see
Your face is beaming bright as me.
I lean towards you, filled with glee,
Alas, t'was but a dream of thee.

Now i sit here spinning pens,
Sweet words reminiscing in my mind.
I cannot wait to be with you again,
My heart forever with you'll remain.
©2007-2008 ~whoosh1
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Submitted: July 16, 2007
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Written on the 16th July at 11pm when i couldn't sleep. Fourth stanza is kinda sad but oh well ^^". I mean every word i say in here, I love you Maddy I really do. <3~
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~maddy39:iconmaddy39: Jul 17, 2007, 3:15:58 AM Mood: Attraction
hehe xD thanks for the poem!! >< it was realyl sweet of u hehe ~><~ i love it!!! *runs and hugs u tight and then kiss u*~><~ i love u!!~<3 really really sweet poem *giggles happily: weee!* keke ~><~

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~whoosh1:iconwhoosh1: Jul 17, 2007, 3:21:31 AM
im glad that you love it and think that its sweet ^_^. i'd be sad if you hated the way i feel ><!! i love you too *hugs you tight* keke
~My1Heaven:iconMy1Heaven: Jul 17, 2007, 3:39:11 AM
wow. it seems very romantic. :)

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~maddy39:iconmaddy39: Jul 17, 2007, 3:54:15 AM
aww =p hehe silly *hugs u tight* well i dont *puts my head on urs and looks down at u* i dont hate the way u feel hehe =p so dont think bout sad stuffy!! *^^

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~whoosh1:iconwhoosh1: Jul 17, 2007, 5:12:21 AM
yaaaaay. i wont think bout sad stuffs if you dont tehe
~maddy39:iconmaddy39: Jul 17, 2007, 5:22:38 AM
heh alrite i will try not to!!*put a cork in the place where the sad stuff comes thru in my head* there we go! i blcked it!

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~whoosh1:iconwhoosh1: Jul 17, 2007, 5:48:10 AM
aww thanks. it's written for my gf :)
~My1Heaven:iconMy1Heaven: Jul 17, 2007, 7:27:45 AM
its very sweet of you. i know she will like it. :)

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~whoosh1:iconwhoosh1: Jul 17, 2007, 8:30:01 AM
read the first few comments that's her. she did like it so i am happy! ^_^!!!